A Tiptoe Through the Minefield of DC Thomson Contracts


There has been a lot of talk amongst writers about the new contracts that DC Thomson are rolling out. Some felt it was a ‘rights grab’ and to begin with that was entirely uncertain. Now it seems that it’s not so much a rights grab as DCT asking for more rights than they did before.

Others have covered this subject better and in more depth than me. Womagwriter has several posts on her blog worth reading.

DC Thomson Contracts in which Womag does her best to sort through the fog of the contracts.

This was followed by a Response from DCT editor, Shirley Blair. It’s important you read through the comments too as Shirley answers several questions there.

Most recently, Simon Whaley sought legal advice from The Society of Authors and also spoke to Angela Gilchrist at DCT. You can read his post HERE. (you’ll need to be sitting comfortably as it’s a long post).

So what do the contracts mean for short story/article writers? Basically, DCT buy First Rights to your story, but then they can use it again without paying you (though as I say in the comments on Simon’s blog, I do hope they’d have the courtesy to let you know so that you can at least log the re-use with ALCS). But once your work has appeared in a DCT publication once, you are free to send that work elsewhere. Angela has assured Simon that DCT will not hang on to stories or articles indefinitely.

What do the new contracts mean for pocket novelists? In the past we have been able to sell on to Large Print publishers by sending in the printed copy of the work. DCT have known we’re doing this, but have apparently turned a blind eye to it. Now they will stop us sending in the printed version on the basis they own half the copyright due to the editorial input. So from now on we will only be able to send our original manuscripts to large print publishers. As the LP publishers don’t normally accept original mss, this could cause problems. I emailed Sarah Quirke at Ulverscroft/Thorpe the other week and she is looking into this, but assures me that U/T are as eager to receive our romances as we are to sell them, so she is discussing this with others in the company in an attempt to find a way through it. Another pocketeer pal has contacted a different LP publisher and they too are looking into it.

One thing DCT cannot do is re-use our pocket novels without further payment. Shirley Blair assured us on Womag’s blog that if they wanted to re-use them, there would have to be further negotiations. Neither can they sell them onto a third party publisher (i.e. cutting out the middle man and going to large print) without our permission because just as they own half the copyright, so do we.

Much for the pocket novelists depends now on what the large print publishers say. If they are not willing to take original manuscripts, for whatever reason, it means that we will only be earning £300 (at present) for a 50,000 word novel. We can put them on ebook, as long as we use our own manuscript, but those of who do that don’t earn a huge amount from it. Certainly not as much as from large print, which also brings us Public Lending Rights.

I’m a bit torn about this as when I first wrote a pocket novel for My Weekly, it was £200 for 30,000 words and I didn’t even know, until the lovely Cara Cooper told me, that I could sell to large print. I did it for the challenge and because it was fun. But now I do know, it does colour my judgement somewhat. I can’t un-know it or ignore the benefits of re-selling. Artistic achievement is wonderful, but money is pretty good to have too, especially in Tesco on food shopping day.  On the other hand, I feel a certain amount of loyalty to Maggie Seed at DCT, who has been a fantastic editor and mentor to me, and I’d feel sad to think I could never work with her again. There’s also the thing that if I don’t sell pocket novels to DCT, there aren’t many other markets out there. Yes, there’s Mills and Boon, but I’ve yet to write something that pleases them. So would I be cutting off my nose to spite my face if I decided never to write another pocket novel for DCT again just because I couldn’t sell on to large print?

So at the moment I don’t know what I’m going to do if/when I receive the new contract. Much will depend on what the large print publishers say about receiving original mss. For the record, whatever decision I make in the end will be based on my life and my personal circumstances and not on what other people think I should do.

I hope that all writers affected by this support each other, regardless of what personal choices we all make in regard to the new contract. If people don’t want to sign, that’s up to them. If people do want to sign, that’s up to them too.

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Call for Submissions


Call for Submissions from Escape Publishing. Though the publisher is based in Australia, stories don’t have to be.

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Thrillers and Sci-Fi – Free to download today!


I’m delighted to announce that some of my back list of thrillers and sci-fi are free to download today. I have republished Valla’s Secret, Tomorrow’s Child and Time in a Bottle in improved format (if you previously downloaded these, you can get the new versions by going to ‘Manage My Kindle’ in your amazon account). I have rebranded them as Sally Quilford Bitesize Fiction to make it clearer that they are shorter stories. If you look at my other work on Amazon, you’ll see that I’ve also rebranded many of my pocket novels as ‘Sally Quilford Pocket Novels’. Again this is to make it clear that the novels are of the shorter variety.

And for the first time in its own volume, I have published one of my NaNoWriMo novels from several years ago, called Mary Daniels’ End Game. Set in a dystopian future, it is about a game show where the main characters have to fight for their lives.

All the above will be free to download today. The free status isn’t showing as I type this, so keep checking. You can also download them in your own country if you have a local Amazon. Just google my name or the titles to find them.

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Lonesome Ranger free download and upcoming workshop


Lonesome Ranger FREE today

Lonesome Ranger FREE today

My Pulse romance, Lonesome Ranger, is free to download today! It was also free to download yesterday and reached Number 1 in the Western charts as the screenshot below shows.

Screenshot of Lonesome Ranger at Number 1 in Western Charts

Screenshot of Lonesome Ranger at Number 1 in Western Charts

Short Story Workshop

My Short Stories from the Ground Up workshop starts on 18th May.

Short Stories From the Ground Up.

Commencing Saturday 18th May 2013

This 8 week course will cover such topics as ‘What is a Short Story?’ and ‘What isn’t a short story?’, but it will also start from the very beginning, teaching participants how to create a short story, starting, literally, from the ground up. This will include ‘Beginnings, Middles and Ends’ (in which participants will do three exercises on those subjects that will eventually lead to a completed story), Show vs Tell, creating memorable characters, using dialogue, point of view and finding ideas (plus other subjects I may develop before the course begins). At the end of the course you should have (at least) one story completed. It will also include a critique, by me, of a different 2000 word story (which doesn’t have to be the story you were working on), at the end of the course. It will begin on 18th May 2013 and end on Saturday 13th July 2013. The cost, to include the critique, will be £80 for those paying by cheque/postal order (stirling only, I’m afraid) and £85 for those pay via paypal (to cover paypal costs). All payments by cheque must be received by Saturday 11th May 2013 and state clearly which course you are interested in. Please note that participation is limited to 10 people. Contact me for more details, including payment instructions, if you are interested in taking part.

As with my other courses, there is no need for participants to log on at any particular time during the week, as all the ‘action’ (so to speak) takes place on a forum, where participants can log on anytime it suits them. However, exercises will be posted each Saturday and it is hoped they will be completed by the following Friday.

Please note: This course is aimed at those relatively new to short story writing, or those who wish to improve their existing short story writing skills.

There are plenty of places left, so if you would like to take part, please contact me for payment details. This will be the last short story workshop I run for the foreseeable future, and the last online workshop I run in 2013. My next courses will begin in January 2014 and concentrate on writing novels/novellas.

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Guest Post – Kathleen McGurl and How to Write a Book in a Week


Ghost Stories and How to Write Them

Today I’m delighted to hand my blog over to Kathleen McGurl, who has written a really enjoyable how-to book Ghost Stories and How to Write Them. Kath appears to have a companion in this post, but I think she’s an imposter for reasons I’ll give at the end…

How to Write a Book in a Week

 

I’ve known Sally online for ten years now…

 

Sally: Is it really that long?

Kath: Yes! We ‘met’ on the old BBC Get Writing website, remember?

Sally: How could I ever forget!

 

… and in all those ten years she has never ceased to amaze and inspire me on two accounts…

 

Sally: Only two?

Kath: Well, two that I wanted to mention now, if you’ll let me…

Sally: Sorry! (presses lips firmly together and puts hand over mouth)

 

As I was saying, two accounts:

Firstly, her constant enthusiasm for new projects. Sally has endless great ideas and throws herself heart and soul into her writing She always has several projects on the go at once. And secondly…

 

Sally: I thought you were going to tell us how to write a book in a week? Loving all the praise, but get to the point!

Kath: I’m getting there… give me time

Sally: (grumbles) This blog post will take a week to write at this rate

Kath: It will if you keep interrupting…

 

And secondly, the speed at which Sally writes. She’s done Nanowrimo who knows how many times, and can write a Pocket Novel in a month. Anyway, after ten years, some Sallyness must have rubbed off on me…

 

Sally: Ooh er, missus!

 

….because I found myself with a great idea for a book and a huge amount of enthusiasm for it. All I needed was a bit of Sallyspeed to write it.

 

Sally: (polishes fingernails) 120 words per minute, me…

 

I’d been considering publishing an anthology of ghost stories for a while, but wasn’t sure if anyone would be interested enough to buy it. But then I had the idea of combining it with discussion on what makes a good women’s magazine ghost story, so the book would be a hybrid – part anthology and part How To. Had anyone done that before? I had a quick search on Amazon and could see nothing similar. Worth a try, then.

 

That was on a Friday evening. I picked out the stories I wanted to include and made a list. I jotted some notes on topics to cover, then worked out a rough structure – which story would best illustrate each discussion topic. I knew I wanted the book to chain from story to discussion to story…

 

Sally: She’s getting technical again. She does that in the book. There’s graphs showing story arcs and everything.

Kath: It’s not too technical! I love a bit of story analysis. The more you understand good story structure the better able you are to write a story which works, I think.

 

…so that hopefully, the reader would not be able to put the book down.

 

I started writing the book on Saturday afternoon. I started at the very beginning…

 

Sally: (sings) A very good place to start. When you read you begin with A B C…

Kath: (rolls eyes)

 

… got the introduction written, copied in the first story and wrote its discussion section, and then found I couldn’t stop. The book just poured out of me, and I let it. I followed my structural notes but didn’t edit as I wrote it at all.

 

Five days later, I’d completed the first draft.

 

Sally: Thought you said a week?

Kath: I lied. It was 5 days.

Sally: That’s even faster than me!

 

I should come clean here – the book is 24,000 words long, of which half is made up of the stories which were, of course, already written.

 

Sally: Ah, so you cheated!

Kath: There are no rules

Sally: There are in your book. All those rules for ghosts…

Kath: Which the writer must determine to make their story work, yes. You’ve got to make your ghosts believable, even if you don’t believe in ghosts.

Sally: You what?

Kath: It’s all explained in the book!

 

It took longer to edit, proof-read, and format for publishing on Kindle, than it did to write the first draft. That’s what happens when you’re all fired up with a good idea, and you know what you want to write. When that happens, go with the flow and write till your fingers fall off. Harness that energy.

 

So in summary, to write a book in a week, know exactly what you want to write, have half of it already written, spend long hours writing and make it a short book.

 

Sally: Better make it a good one too, if you want to sell it. Which yours is, well done.

Kath: Thank you, my dear! And thanks for hosting this guest post.

Sally: You’re welcome. Cup of tea?

Kath: Don’t mind if I do.

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Thanks Kath! I loved reading that post. You’ve got me spot on (apart from the fact that I’d have offered a glass of Baileys after such hard work!)

 You can buy Ghost Stories and How to Write Them from

Amazon.co.uk

 Amazon.com

 And you can catch up with Kath on the utterly brilliant Womagwriter blog

 

 

 

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Me and Cleopatra at Fifty


I can now reveal the secret project I’ve been working on for the last month. This year, as well as being my 50th year, is also the 50th anniversary of the film, Cleopatra, starring Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton. I was invited by pocket novel editor, Maggie Seed, to write a novel inspired by the film and by the love affair that took place both on and off the set. I finished editing it yesterday, sent it last night and Maggie has accepted it today. So now I can talk about it at last!

My title for it is Take My Breath Away, which is inspired by the last words that Marc Antony said to Cleopatra before he died; ‘Take my breath away … with a kiss.’ Sigh. However, sometimes titles are changed so I’ll advise people of the correct title nearer to the time.

It is set in modern Britain, and is about a group of actors remaking the film, Cleopatra under the yoke of mad director, George Cassius. When the actor playing ‘Caesar’, Jason Carter (inspired by Richard Burton rather than Rex Harrison), is murdered, closely followed by a couple of other members of the film crew, Jason’s ex-wife, Patty Carter (inspired by lovely Rachel Weiss but with Taylor’s violet eyes), who is playing Cleopatra in the film, is a suspect. Particularly as she seems to be hiding something. There are no less than two Marc Antonys vying for her attention. One is real-life insurance investigator, Tony Marcus (inspired by James Purefoy), and the other is actor Matt Archer (inspired by Jai Courtney), who is playing Marc Antony in the film. Patty also has an adorable son, Jude.

I absolutely loved writing it, and I will be putting two copies of it into my 50th birthday party giveaway! It should be out mid-July, but I’ll give more details when I have them.

By the way, this is my 11th pocket novel!

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Kate Long – The Winner


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I’m delighted to announce that Margaret Shelton is the winner of Kate Long’s signed book, Bad Mothers United. Margaret has been informed and the book will be winging its way to her soon.

Kate was so impressed by all the comments made that in the end she had to put them all into a hat and choose that way! She asked me to thank everyone for their interesting contributions to the competition.

Commiserations, as always to those who did not win, but don’t forget that in August I’m doing my 50th birthday comp, and there’s another chance to win a copy of Kate’s book in that along with loads of other prizes!

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100k in 100 days and Romance writing workshop


I’ve come to the end of two very enjoyable sessions this week. On Wednesday 10th April 2013, the 100k in 100 days challenge ended. We had a great time over at the Facebook group. So much so that we’re running it again from 1st July 2013 – 8th October 2013 (just in time for you to have a month off before NaNoWriMo starts)! If you’d like to take part, just join us there where we’ll just be hanging out till the next challenge starts.

For this challenge, which started on 1st January, I didn’t quite manage the 100k, but a last minute sprint on the Wednesday took me to just over 90k! Between us (of the 100 participants who kept logs on Gerald Hornsby’s brilliant spreadsheet) we wrote 3,634,829 words.

So from now on, we’ll be running the challenge twice yearly, and you can just join in with any of the challenges you want.

I’ve also come to the end, today, of my last online romance writing workshop. It’s been a great workshop with lovely people, and I’m pretty sure a good time was had by all!

From next year (2014) I will be changing the course to a one-to-one setting, so it will still be online, but done by email between me and individual students instead of on a forum. Though I may use the forum so people can meet and chat and share work should they wish to and so I can post announcements. The course will last three months and involve exercises you can do at home on your own, plus 6 tmas, covering the most important elements of romance writing, which will be critiqued by me. To compliment that will be a Romance Writers’ Workbook which I will put on Kindle when it’s written (hence it taking so long before the new courses start as I have to write it yet!), but which will be given free to anyone taking part in the course. I have to work out the full details but I’m expecting it to cost around £120 per person for the three month course and I expect to run it three times per year: 1st Jan-31st Mar, 1st May-31st July then 1st Sept- 30th Nov. If you’re interested in going on the mailing list, contact me, and I’ll put you down on the list. I’m not planning on taking on more than 5 or 6 students in any one session so it will be on a first come first served basis, but anyone who misses out on one three month course will be invited to take part in the next three month course.

On May 18th 2013 I start a Short Stories From The Ground Up course. This will follow the format of my previous workshops, which will be done online in a forum in a workshop situation, but because of my new venture which I expect to take up a lot of time, it will be the last time I run a short story course online. So if you’re interested in taking part, the details are HERE. However, I will still run my short story critiquing service, which you are welcome to take advantage of at any time.

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Midnight Train – Out NOW!


Midnight Train - In the shops now

Midnight Train – In the shops now

 

My ‘Die Hard on a Train with Romance’ story, Midnight Train is now in the shops. You can buy it from Asda, Tesco, Sainsburys, WHSmiths and larger newsagents. You’ll find it amongst the women’s magazines.

The novel was written for NaNoWriMo 2012, and as a result it includes a lot of plot ninjas that I was offered during that challenge (one of which was a very special little boy called Solomon who had a dinosaur – he’s my grandson and he steals every scene he’s in!)

I absolutely love the cover. I told them that my heroine looks like the gorgeous Alex Kingston and they’ve done me proud. (The hero looks like Charles Dance if you’re wondering). Angela Cunningham is my favourite heroine so far; a sexy, sassy older woman who is not afraid to say what she thinks.  But she also has a good heart and has known sadness in her life.

Some of you will have met her and the hero Michael Fairfax, before in several stories in my collection, The Night of the Mange Tout.  Angela is also the daughter of Meredith and Andrew Cunningham from Midchester (which was serendipity as I hadn’t realised that I’d given her the same maiden name till I started writing this and yet she was Angela Cunningham years before I wrote that).This is the story of how she met Michael and it’s a long way from the vicarage at Stony End!

I can’t tell you how thrilled I am to have their romance immortalised in print, as for a long time it was just one of several ideas I had of bringing them together. The first two ideas were the basic ‘cosy murder’, though one idea would have taken place on a boat. Midnight Train is nothing like those! It’s a high octane thriller such as the ones I love to watch on DVD, involving terrorists and the country of Cariastan, which is mentioned in my other novel, A Collector of Hearts.  So basically, it’s my entire fictional universe all brought together in one exciting (I hope!) story.

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Guest Blog – Kate Long talks settings and a chance to win her new book!


I’ve got a real treat for you this week. The wonderful Kate Long has popped into the blog to talk about the importance of settings in novels and discusses her own setting in The Bad Mother’s Handbook and the brilliant sequel Bad Mother’s United - Bank Top, which is inspired by her home town of Blackrod in Lancashire.

Read to the end to find out how you can win a signed copy of her fantastic new novel, Bad Mother’s United.

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There’s this Place I Want you to See

Kate Long

 

“You can walk through Bank Top in fifteen minutes, a small dull village hunching along the ridge of  hill and sprawling down the sides in two big housing estates. From the highest point it affords panoramic  views of industrial Lancashire: factories, warehouses, rows and rows of red brick terraces and, on the horizon, the faint grey-green line of millstone-grit moorland. To the south there’s the television mast where a German plane is supposed to have come down fifty years ago. To the north there’s Blackpool Tower, just visible on the skyline. I used to spend hours squinting to see the illuminations, but they’re too far away.”

Blackrod in the snow

Blackrod in the snow

So observes 17 year-old Charlotte Cooper at the start of The Bad Mother’s Handbook. She’s describing a view that I saw myself every day till I left the north to go to Bristol university. After I got my degree I married and settled in Shropshire, and I thought I’d left that childhood landscape behind. So it was a surprise to find, when I began writing my first full-length adult novel back in 2000,that it was Lancashire characters I wanted to create, in a Lancashire setting.

Without wanting to romanticise, Bank Top is one of those places where the geography is somehow the people. Stoical, dry-humoured, spare in speech, the inhabitants of the village tend to take each outrageous turn of fate in their stride and without fanfare or fuss. It’s as if the millstone grit beneath their feet had helped set their essential personalities. Or at least, that’s how I remember it. ‘Eh, tha wants summat t’ skrike about,’ was a phrase you’d regularly hear spoken to some wailing child. In other words, Get a grip, kid. Life’s tough. Move on.

I’d say there’s a sense of isolation to Bank Top – in real life the ex-pit village of Blackrod, situated half way between Bolton and Wigan. It sits alone and unconnected on top of a hill, surrounded by fields. To a non-driving teen, the place sometimes felt like the back of beyond. “John Donne wrote, ‘No man is an island,’ but he didn’t live in Bank Top. Lucky Bastard,” says Charlotte. And isolation’s an important theme in all my novels which are set there: not only The Bad Mother’s Handbook but its sequel, Bad Mothers United, and my second book, Swallowing Grandma. There’s the isolation of the adolescent, worried that she just isn’t the same as everyone else; of the lonely divorcee who can’t find herself a decent partner; of an older woman aware she’s skirting around dementia. There’s the isolation of having to keep a secret you’d rather not have known in the first place, and of being a carer, or a young single mum, or a person of uncertain sexuality. So the setting reflects the dilemmas of individuals. Pathetic fallacy, if you like.

Bank Top’s also a place very aware of its own history and tradition. You only have to stand and look into the valley below to see the mill chimneys, the defunct pit winding gear and the rows of factory workers’ houses. In all three of those books, the grandmothers’ reminiscences pull the past into the present, making us think about the way attitudes have changed towards illegitimacy, poverty, educational opportunities, childcare. Whatever else I’d like my characters to learn along the way, it’s an appreciation of the equalities and freedoms the Twenty First century has allowed them.

And then there’s the landscape of language. As an only child I grew up listening a lot to adults, many of them dialect-speakers. Words like ‘nowt’, ‘mithered’ and ‘ginnel’* were part of my vocabulary, as were the rhythms, intonations and flat vowels of the region. I love the downwards slide of a Lancashire sentence, and the way you hear the ‘r’ in the middle of words like ‘corner’. It can sound wonderfully poetic or, alternatively, blunt and rude. It’s all part of a continuum that connects a people’s psychology with their geography and for me prompts fiction that feels rounded to write. So when the characters in my Bank Top novels talk, they run on almost independently of me and sometimes I struggle to keep up, as if I were taking dictation.

Setting doesn’t always feel so crucial to my writing. But perhaps because once upon a time Bank Top – or somewhere very like it – was my home, I feel a need to explain it, to convey its qualities good and bad. Bleak or friendly, stifling or comforting, in every sense it’s the place where my writing began.

*nothing, bothered, alleyway.

 Your chance to win!

I bet you’d love a signed copy of Kate’s book, wouldn’t you? Well here’s your chance, but this isn’t going to be one of those ‘pick me’ type contests. You’re going to have to work a bit harder. Kate wants to know about your favourite settings in fiction and what is it about them that appeals to you? Post your answer by 5pm on Friday 12th April (GMT) and Kate will pick her favourite response, and send the winner a signed copy of her novel, Bad Mother’s United.

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Weekly Round Up and Looking Ahead


The Lonesome Ranger rankings as of Tuesday 2nd April 2013

The Lonesome Ranger rankings as of Tuesday 2nd April 2013

It’s been one heck of a week for me this week! Lonesome Ranger was released and hit the heady heights of number 8 and 9 in the Amazon Western Charts!

I’ve also been all over the place talking about it.

On Monday I was on my good pal’s Womagwriter’s Blog

On Tuesday I was on the Pocketeers Blog

And on Thursday I was on the lovely Maria Perry Mohan’s Book Blog

It was a busy week and I’m very lucky that I get so much support for my books from such lovely people. But I hope that they’ll all forgive me when I say that the biggest thrill was being mentioned in The Bookseller!  I never expected anything like that to happen!

Coming up next

Coming up next week I’ll be on the Pulse Romance blog talking about writing Action! Drama! Romance! And on my blog Monday morning (8th April), I’ll be welcoming guest blogger, Kate Long, who is offering up a signed copy of Bad Mothers United, the follow up to The Bad Mother’s Handbook.

Workshop and One-To-One course news

I’m just coming to the end of my latest Sweet Romance Writing workshop. It is the last one for this year, but there is a short story writing workshop starting in May. Details are on my Events page. The Short Stories From the Ground Up course will be my last workshop for 2013, and the last workshop I’ll run in a forum/group situation. In 2014, I intend to offer just one course and it will be a one-to-one romance writing course by email. Each course will last three months and I expect to have 3 starting dates a year (with none over the summer holidays because of schools being out – in Britain at least). Some of the exercises will be done by yourselves at home in your own time, but there will be several tutor marked assignments that you can send to me for comment on and I will be available to contact for help and support by email at any time.

I haven’t worked out a price yet, but as it’s one-to-one and lasts longer than the 8 week group workshops I’ve been doing, I expect it to be around £120 per person (which works out at £40 a month. If you are interested in being put on a mailing list for that, Contact Me, and I’ll inform everyone when the course is ready to start. The reason it’s going to be so long before it starts is that I have to write the course handbook, which will be quite long, (This will also be on Kindle, but available to students free with their course booking) as well as a tma booklet available only to students, and I have write them and work out all the course details and exactly what I’m going to cover in that three months. So I’ll need the summer and the end of the year in which to do that.

So lots happening! And now I have to get back to this special project I keep harping on about!

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Romance Writing and Reinventing the Wheel


The recent case against Harlequin for plagiarism has brought up the subject of originality in writing romance. In that case, a wannabe writer accused Mills and Boon novelist, Kate Walker of plagiarising the wannabe writer’s romance in Walker’s own work, The Proud Wife. Kate was exonerated and the case was thrown out of court, with prejudice. The court document makes very interesting reading on the subject of the tropes used in romance, and I suggest you take some time to read it. It is long, but really accessible for a court document.

As a friend said, when I mentioned the case in a private forum, the problem is that so many new writers believe they are reinventing the wheel and that every idea that comes from their head is brand new and brilliantly original. Well it is to them, but perhaps not to readers. One thing that occurred to me was that the writer does not appear to have researched the market, and she clearly had not read a lot (if any) of Kate Walker’s books. One of Kate’s gifts as a writer is in dissecting a marriage in crisis and then putting it back together again in an emotionally charged story. She has also dealt with the pain of child loss in her books before. Yet each book is different, because she is able to bring something different to each character and situation.

I’m deliberately not naming the wannabe writer here as I don’t want a witch hunt against her. She was naïve, that’s all. All new writers think that if they send their work off anywhere, the publisher will reject it then steal their fantastic and original ideas. That’s why the copyright service makes money out of people when really your work is copyrighted from the moment you put your name to it.

I was the same about my work when I started out, convinced that evil publishers were just waiting to nick all my best ideas. Only when I look back at my early work now do I realise how unoriginal all my work is. But I also accept that nothing I write now will be entirely original. There are, after all, only seven basic plots to go around (or 36 by Polti’s rather more generous count).

The wannabe writer was also badly advised by her legal team, who did not know much about writing romance. Would it have hurt them to read a few more Mills and Boon books before bringing a case that not only brought untold stress to a lovely woman (Kate Walker) but also will leave the plaintiff seriously out of pocket?  

The fact is that if you write any genre, whether it be romance or crime, you are going to struggle to ever be entirely original. The TV Tropes page is a fantastic resource for all the tropes used in films, television and books, and it points up the universal tropes that many genres use.

The heroes in romance novels are always tall dark and handsome (and it was Kate Walker herself who told us in a workshop that this is because in South America they don’t like blonde heroes). I’ve lost count of how many of my heroines have red hair and green eyes. Or how many of my heroes were ridiculously rich with, if not a private jet, then a private helicopter. They are the trappings one expects of a rich man, and of the world into which the heroine is taken from her relatively normal life.

Because that’s what you’re selling in a romance. It’s the fantasy of an ordinary girl next door who finds a man who is not only handsome and great in bed, but who can jet her off all over the world for that rip-roaring sex. If Cinderella were written  today (and it often is in a roundabout way in romance), Prince Charming would have his own jet to go all over the world satisfying his foot fetish, and the shoes she wore to the ball would be Jimmy Choos (or whatever shoes are the in thing at the moment  – I pathetically don’t keep up with fashion, sorry).

Bridget Jones was championed at the time for being original, when really it isn’t original at all. It’s Pride and Prejudice for a modern audience. Even the format, that of a diary, isn’t original, and goes back to such epistolary works as Bram Stoker’s Dracula and Choderlos de Lacros’s Les Liaisons Dangereuses. Only the voice is original and it sparked off the chick lit genre, which now has its own tropes and conventions.

This post on another blog talks about the story of an orphan who finds out he has magical powers, and a male and female friend who fall in love with each other.  Can you guess who it is before you go over there and read the post?

Even in the crime genre, you’re never going to be truly original. There will be a dead body. There will be a murderer. The murderer will probably be the person you suspect the least. Sometimes the tropes are subverted, but in general they’ll be the same.

Horror also has its own tropes. There’s the ghost story, the haunted house story, the Lovecraftian monster story, the science gone mad story.

Because that’s what the fans of the different genres expect. They expect a dead body and a murderer in crime, a ghost or a demented creature in a horror story and, for the most part, they expect a rich man and ordinary girl paring in romance.

New writers need to stop trying to reinvent the wheel, and they should certainly stop thinking they’ve reinvented the wheel. Such a thing is not possible. If you write about a zombie apocalypse, you will be influenced by every zombie film or television show you’ve ever seen. Even if you think you’re doing it differently. What is Twilight if it isn’t Buffy and Angel with Buffy’s superpowers stripped away to turn her into a rather useless teenage girl? Admittedly no one saw the sparkly vampires coming, but otherwise it’s just the same ‘ordinary girl in love with an immortal’ fare that’s been around for years.

My own success in novels came when I stopped trying to be original and fell back on my love of Hitchcockian type romantic intrigues. I don’t pretend to be original, but I hope my stories are fun to read.

The best advice I’ve seen recently came from Kate Walker herself in an interview for my Love Notes column.

“Another piece of advice,” said Kate, “is to write as yourself. Don’t try to imitate any established romance writers.” She accepts that it’s hard ‘if not impossible’ to be completely original. However, “You can be authentic.”

So strive for authenticity in your writing. The rest will surely follow. Oh and do research any markets before you write for them, so you understand the conventions before you go accusing other hard working writers of stealing your ideas.

Useful Links

The judgement in the case of the Harlequin plagiarism trial

 TV Tropes Romance Novel Tropes

Crime and Punishment Tropes

Horror Tropes

Seven Basic Plots

Polti’s 36 Dramatic Situations

Writing Forward post on originality

I’m also discussing this from a different point of view on the Pocketeers blog

(nb: Just because something is said to be a ‘trope’ it does not follow that it is a bad thing, despite the sometimes sneering attitude on the TV Tropes pages to romance. Tropes are merely conventions that people recognise in certain works.)

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The Lonesome Ranger Out Today


Lonesome Ranger out on 2nd April 2013

Lonesome Ranger out Today!

 

My new ebook, from Pulse Romance, The Lonesome Ranger, is out today!

To celebrate I’m  holding a Hoe Down over at Facebook to which all are welcome. We’re going to be talking favourite cowboys, playing lots of country and western music and generally having a good old hoe down!

And don’t forget that as a taster of my western romance style, Bella’s Vineyard is still FREE to download today from an Amazon near to you.

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Freebie and Writing What You Don’t Know


I’m over on my lovely friend, Womagwriter’s blog this morning discussing writing about places I’ve never been but which I have still written about. And I’m also offering a freebie to celebrate the release of Lonesome Ranger which is out with Pulse Romance tomorrow (2nd April). Scroll down for details.

Lonesome Ranger out on 2nd April 2013

Lonesome Ranger out on 2nd April 2013

Bella's Vineyard  FREE to download on 1st and 2nd April (and on other days this week to be announced)

Bella’s Vineyard FREE to download on 1st and 2nd April (and on other days this week to be announced)

And to celebrate the release of Lonesome Ranger tomorrow, and to give you a taster of my western romance writing style, I’ve made Bella’s Vineyard free to download on Amazon for today and tomorrow. The two links go to amazon.co.uk and .com, but you can also download it from Amazon sites in Germany, Italy, Spain, France, Canada, Brazil and Japan!

Bella’s Vineyard on Amazon.co.uk

Bella’s Vineyard on Amazon.com

Tomorrow we’ll be talking cowboys all day at the Lonesome Ranger Hoe Down on FB. All are welcome to attend.

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Sally’s Geek Zone Blog


I’ve created a new blog called Sally’s Geek Zone. It’ll be a blog dedicated to all the films, television, books and other popular culture that interests me.  I like lists of stuff on other blogs, so I think it makes sense for me to have a blog with lists of stuff.

I know I probably could have done it here, but I think my readers here expect writing talk. Not that there won’t be some writing talk on the Geek Zone as I look at the mediums I’ve mentioned in relation to what they teach me as a writer. But it won’t all be about that. Mainly it’ll be about ogling hunky men…

I’ve started by copying my post on 48 Favourite Fictional Heroes over there, just to get the party started.

 

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50th Birthday Giveaway update – any free downloads to offer?


The offers continue to pour in for my 50th Birthday Giveaway. Thank you to everyone who has so generously offered their time and their books to this huge giveaway. You can read the most up to date list HERE. There are well over 30 prizes already! If you have anything to submit to the prize draw, do contact me, though as I’ve said before, it must be a definite giveaway and not money off services. Winners should not have to pay anything to receive their prize.

What I would like to ask is whether anyone else would like to offer any more free Kindle downloads on the day (11th August 2013). I have three free downloads promised (mine and two other lovely people), but the more the merrier as they say, and that way everyone goes away with a prize on the day. It will be a great way to promote yourself and your ebook. Your ebook doesn’t have to be romance just because I write romance. It can be any genre or even non-fiction.  I know it’s a big ask, so I understand if people don’t want to.  Contact me with details of your book and your giveaway if you’re happy to do this. Just to be clear, it does have to be a free download, not a reduced price ebook.

I’ve been thinking about how I’ll distribute the prizes. Each contributor will deal with making sure the winners gets their prizes, and I’ll be passing on the names to them, but I mean how I’m going to choose. I think it would be fairer, and spread the prizes more evenly, if we only allowed only one critique/editing prize per winner drawn out of the hat. Then everyone could go into the prize draw again for the physical books or ebooks that the contributing authors are sending to individuals, and again there would only be one prize per person. So some winners might win a critique prize and a book prize, but no more than two prizes in total. If there are under 50 entrants we may have to rethink this, but I’m hoping that loads will join in. Prizes would not be transferable and could not be exchanged for the monetary value.  Oh and you can enter even if you’ve submitted one of the prizes, but obviously you won’t go into the draw for your own prize because that would just be silly!

With the free downloads, everyone would be a winner as they can just choose themselves which books they want to download. I’ll link to them on the day.

I’m also going to make it a rule that only private individuals may enter (so no company or corporation entries) and they may only enter once (though they will go into two draws – one for the critiques and one for the book prizes). And people must give proper names and a valid email address. Not screen names or initials.

And how I thought we’d choose a winner is to have everyone, on the day, link to the prize draw post from either their blog, website, Twitter or FB, then come here and post that they’ve done so in the competition post I’ll be setting up that day, (with a link to prove they’ve done it). That way it also spreads the word about the comp and there’s a chance of more entries.

Does that sound fair to everyone? Especially to those sharing their wonderful booty? I want everyone to feel comfortable with this and to feel that everyone is getting a chance to win something, but I also want to be sure that one person isn’t going off with half a dozen prizes.

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50th Birthday Giveaway – The story so far


I have been overwhelmed by everyone’s generosity this morning! This is only a preliminary list of what will be on offer on 11th August, and is subject to change,  but here’s an idea of what’s on offer so far! If you have anything to offer as a freebie on 11th August 2013, do contact me so I can add it to the list (strictly no ‘money off’ offers. I don’t want the winners having to pay to receive their prize. See previous post for details). My hope is to have 50 prizes (though if it goes over, I’m sure no one will mind). Thank you to everyone for their generosity so far!

Prizes for 50th Birthday Giveaway

Sally’s Prizes

1 free critique from Sally Quilford worth £25 for story 2001-2500 words

1 free critique from Sally Quilford worth £20 for story 1501-2000 words

1 free critique from Sally Quilford worth £15 for story up to 1500 words

Copy of My Weekly Pocket Novel Midnight Train by Sally Quilford (may be more than one)

2 signed copies of Mistletoe Mystery by Sally Quilford (Large Print)

2 signed copies of Our Day Will Come by Sally Quilford (Large Print)

Possible copy of most recent pocket novel (tba)

Freebies on Amazon (tba)

Other prizes:

Signed copy of Game On by Kyra Lennon

Mobipocket (Kindle) copy of Trust in Me by Suzanna Ross

Mobipocket (Kindle) copy of Blaze – Minxes on the Blog anthology featuring Suzanna Ross et al.

Signed copy of ‘The Little Book of Alternative Garden Wisdom’ by Simon Whaley

Editing service from Miriam Drori for one novel or collection of short stories up to 50k (but no sci-fi or pornography – some sex scenes are okay)

Signed copy of Crossing Life Lines (women’s fiction/chick lit) by Rachel Dove

Follow your Star by Jennie Bohnet

Signed copy of Bad Mother’s United (women’s fiction) by Kate Long and some signed bookplates

Free download of Earth Magic by Linda Gruchy (aka Linda Priestley)

Critique of short story by Linda Gruchy

Offer of Beta reading from Sue Barnard for 50k novel (preferably romance, but anything as long as it’s not a specialist text book) or short stories up to a 50k limit.

A signed copy of Screaming Yellow (BDSM erotica) by Rachel Green

Signed copy of Sleeping On a Cloud paperback by Joff Gainey

I make that 20 book/critique prizes and two freebie downloads (from me and Linda Priestley).  I’ll keep updating this list as I get more. But it’s going to be one heck of a giveaway on 11th August!

I’ve created a page where I will keep updating all the prizes as they’re offered HERE

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50 years 50 prizes? Can you help out on my 50th Birthday Giveaway?


I’ve made no secret of the fact that I’m 50 years old this coming August. I had an idea this morning that I might give some of my books away on my birthday. Then I thought (in the words of Marianne from Cybill) ‘No, I can do better than that’. Or I could do better than that with your help.

My idea is to give away 50 prizes and/or freebies on my birthday. I don’t actually have fifty books to give away. I could probably rustle up a dozen at most. But I could also offer some free critiques as extra prizes and make some of my online work free to download  But then it still wouldn’t amount fifty prizes, unless I wanted to go bankrupt.

So that’s where you come in my friends. Would anyone like to donate a prize or freebie to my 50th birthday giveaway? It can be signed printed books, or ebooks, or a free critique or editing service. Anything that will promote you and your work or a service you offer. But it has to be a complete prize and not 50% off or whatever. I don’t want anyone to have to spend money to claim prizes on my blog (so vanity publishers need not apply). Even if you only make one of your books free to download on Amazon that day, I will count it as a prize and it will be one that everyone can enjoy. Each person will be responsible for the distributing of their prize/giveaway. I’ll just pass on the names of the winners to them and then they can sort it out amongst themselves.

I know it’s an awfully big ask of people, and this may just remain a pipe dream, apart from my own few giveaways, but if you are interested in offering a prize or freebie on my birthday (which is 11th August), contact me with details and I’ll start keeping a list of what’s on offer until we reach the big FIVE O. Then if I share what we’ve got so far on my blog, it may encourage others.

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A Word from Inceptio Prize Winner Edith O’Nuallain


The winner of the signed copy of Inceptio by Alison Morton was Edith O’Nuallain, and she has given both Alison and myself permission to copy this email to our blogs.  I haven’t changed a word! Well done to Edith (and sorry for not posting the result sooner, I’ve been up to my eyes writing a new pocket novel for My Weekly and the days just slipped by)

> Hi Alison,
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> just wanted to thank you again for sending me your signed copy of your new novel.
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> My husband has just finished devouring it and has really enjoyed it, even to the extent of eeking it out over a few days and nights in order to extend the enjoyment!
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> He loved the fast pace of its thriller theme and its fictitious setting in Nova Roma. He reckons that it is the military side which is particularly appealing to male readers.
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> Now he wants to know how long will he have to wait for the next novel in the series and can you please put my name on a mailing list, if you have one, to let me know so I can buy him a copy?
>
> Thanks again. It was a lovely prize.

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The Midnight Walk for Ashgate Hospice


I had two resolutions this year. One was to lose weight and the other was to get fit enough to do The Midnight Walk for Ashgate Hospice.

Well I’ve now lost 3 and 1/2 stone (not since Jan 1st I hasten to add) and I’m now signed up to do The Midnight Walk on 22nd/23rd June with my beautiful daughter, Amy. The full course is 13k, but for this year I’m just doing half of it at 6.5k as I figured I’d have more chance of finishing that. But I am building up to the big one next year!

Anyway, all this is a roundabout way of asking for sponsorship. I’ve pledged to make £100 for Ashgate Hospice but as that was already at £25 within half an hour of me setting up my page, I may raise that barrier later on. If you’re interested in donating, even if it’s just a £1, you can find my Just Giving Page Here. Thank you.

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